tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048569237490425246.post7388807916694729011..comments2013-07-26T10:31:31.212-05:00Comments on Chris May's EDM310 class blog: Blog Post #10Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07690050141580480378noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048569237490425246.post-15531217700630403162013-07-08T17:28:00.983-05:002013-07-08T17:28:00.983-05:00"So for example a student may be if you think..."So for example a student may be if you think a student has very high potential but they are stubborn and difficult sometimes that the teacher should not give up on that student but keep trying to push and help them towards their own goals." This sentence is really confusing! You need to reword it.<br /><br />"so you should listen to them they could give you some good advice." This is a run-on sentence. Be careful!<br /><br />"In my opinion if their were--" Their should be there.<br /><br />Also, don't forget to add alt and title modifiers to your pictures!<br /><br />Randy really is an amazing person! Even though he knew he only had a short amount of time left, he made lightly of his situation and didn't let it drag him down. We should all strive to be like that in our lives!Becca "Riley" Lathemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03964944561856769569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048569237490425246.post-43898748365651600752013-07-06T10:33:25.060-05:002013-07-06T10:33:25.060-05:00Thoughtful. Interesting.
His speech is a very po...Thoughtful. Interesting.<br /><br /><br />His speech is a very powerful statement. I hope you read it every year and put to work the things you have shared and the many other things about learning and education that Dr. Pausch shared with us in his "Last Lecture".<br />John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048569237490425246.post-25451624123430686392013-07-01T14:30:11.393-05:002013-07-01T14:30:11.393-05:00Looks good Chris! I thought you did a good job sum...Looks good Chris! I thought you did a good job summarizing. I also think the picture you have does a good job describing who Randy Pausch was and the placement is great! I did come across something that you may want to change. On the line under the picture, with the words "...obstacles but she should never..." the word "she" may want to be replaced with "you". There were a few places I saw that could of used a comma so just be aware for future posts. Other than that it looked good!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05266719855052169613noreply@blogger.com