Sunday, February 3, 2013

Blog Post 3

1. These videos and slideshows concerning peer review were very beneficial to me. One of these videos that i particularly enjoyed was the one evolving the children. It was entertaining but at the same time made it easy to understand what not to do when peer reviewing. The way i was taught to peer review was mainly to look for grammatical errors and sentence structure. I can now see that it should be more than that. I need to look into my peers work deeper and help them instead of just reading over their work for simple errors.

I chose to comment on my classmates blog. One reason I chose to do this is because I am not a big email person. I feel that I should be able to say whatever I need to tell them over a simple comment. I feel that I can say what i need to say in the open instead of in a closed email.

2. I was born and raised in the same town Hellen Keller was born in. I have known about how struggling it has been for blind and or deaf individuals. As for the Mountbatten had no idea that that type of technology had been invented.  The Mountbatten is mind blowing! It is comforting to know that their is technology like this that is there to help individuals dealing with disabilities. Even though  I do not have either of these disabilities if i had access to this machine I would have taken advantage of this and learned how to use it.

These new technologies are very interesting to me. One of these that really caught my attention was the use of the blocks with brail numbers on them. Coming from the video about this tool teaching blind students math seems to be and extremely difficult task but with the help of these block tools it has become easier and more efficient. Like I said before I find it comforting to know that there have been enough advances in technology to further teach individuals with blind and deaf disabilities.

3. Harness Your Students' Digital Smarts
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Vicki Davis

Mrs. Vicki Davis' approach on teaching is very similiar to the way that I plan to teach. One thing that really caught my attention in her video was the way she explained that teachers should not feel that they have to now everything about the subject to teach it.  She went on to say that her students have taught her things about the systems that she had not previously discovered. I also like how her classroom is constantly interactive  and he way she uses groups to incorporate the children being interactive.

2 comments:

  1. " that i particularly enjoyed was the one evolving the children." Capitalize the I and evolving should be involving.

    "The way i was taught ..." Capitalize the I.

    "As for the Mountbatten had no idea that that type of technology..." You need an I before had.

    "... that their is technology..." there not their

    "...disabilities if i had access..." Capitalize the I.

    You did not identify the video you watched dealing with the math blocks.

    "...have to now everything..." know not now

    You MUST PROOFREAD!

    Interesting.

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  2. Chris your awesome attitude and enthusiasm shows that you will be a great teacher. I am also pursuing my Education Degree. My wife teaches elementary school and has several students who primarily speak another language. This has been somewhat of a challenge but she has had the opportunity to work one on one with them to help develop their skills. This situation I am sure is not quite as challenging as visual impairment but those students still struggle in communicating with her, other staff and their peers.

    I noticed the suggestions that Dr. Strange has noted and agree with those adjustments to fix those mistakes that add up to take away from your thoughts in your blog. With those corrections you will be well on your way to achieving your goals. Although there are some awkward sentences that could use a little adjustment such as this sentence,

    "Coming from the video about this tool teaching blind students math seems to be and extremely difficult task but with the help of these block tools it has become easier and more efficient" and

    "I have known about how struggling it has been for blind and or deaf individuals"

    These sentences have great content but could be reworded to avoid the jumbled sound as they are read. Chris keep that enthusiasm and I appreciate your desire to become a teacher. Best wishes!

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